withering touches

For the contest "New Experimental Poetry Form." :)

withering

 

losing all colors--a fading spectrum--

a life of stolen hopes

losing my shining memories

                        to an eternal winter

 

without those burning touches

                        inked only in my head

touches

 

 

Author's Note

eh. I hope I got the form right.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I hope you win (or have won if the contest was past). I enjoyed the imagery and depth of this, well done.

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW..... This is REALLY good Alm.... this is a beautifully inked poem !!! Well Done and Bravo !!!

[Alm]

Thank you! :)

[Legolas]

Great poem as usual!!

[Alm]

:)

[Alm]

Thanks, bro :P

[....]

not sure what the form is but i enjoyed this and the way it's set up.

[Alm]

It's for a contest :D And the form was stated there, http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/New-Experimental-Poetry-Form/46181/

Thank you for the review! :D :D :D

-Alm