Borders

A short little tanka on love.

When will my heart break?

I feel it closer, the end

of my feeble heart.

Don’t rob me of this reprieve

these feelings aren’t worth it.

Author's Note

I don't usually write tankas or haikus, 'cause I'm not really that good with them...

Reviews

[Legolas]

Nicely done. My favorite poems to write are haikus. Youve done a great job on this tanka:)

[Tai Ryens]

Not good? You've done a fine job with this piece. You've created a poem that holds a lot of emotions. Good job, I enjoyed this.