Until I Win This War

Stay strong, keep fighting, never back down

They say I'm wrong

I don't know a thing, about life

Or love, or anything

I'm just a child

I don't know a thing

They knock me down

Push me around

Keep me from finding

What life's all about

How will I know

Where I should go

If I never get to try

They tell me to give up

They say

Its not worth the fight

But I will keep fighting

Keep pushing through

Until I win this war

Author's Note

Even if people tell you to give up or you have voices in your head telling you that you should just give up..Don't! Don't give up keep fighting, people are going to think you can't and tell you "you can't" but don't listen to them. Prove them wrong. It's honestly the best revenge. :)

"All these voices in my head tell me its better to give up on what I believe. But I won't give up on what I believe." -Rising Stars (Movie)

"Sometimes its raising your voice, sometimes its making some noise, sometimes its proving to the world..it was wrong." -Lemonade Mouth (Movie)

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~ Sexy Inspiration ~~

I love how you blend your tender saliva of delicious lips with the inspirational words making them as hot as you ... very beautiful and much appreciative write. You`ve done a great job ..even this`s not only a piece but a great spirituality itself indeed. Very sexy message you conveyed to this horny world with your sweet sounding muse. it`s an excellent piece, honey.

[Jazz]

Thank you my dear.

[Stephen]

It`s been a pleasure of mine even since i`ve met you ~~ read your sexy stuffs. Your talent reflects in words ~~ your every muse keeps the world in your sexy heart as well ... good job. Keep walking over the plates of success, Sweety.

[Jazz]

I really appreciate your reviews.

[Stephen]

How much? *Wink* ;)

[Jazz]

More than words can describe :)

[Stephen]

Voo--Whoo .. so, if may I ask you to have some cuddles ..would ya give?? ;) Aye *Wink*

[Jazz]

Cuddles? Sure :) I love to cuddle

[Souvik]

Nice one !! The thought has been nicely expressed through words . Indeed if you have a motive so pure and you are so inclined towards achieving it, nothing can stop you :) My fav part was -
"They knock me down
Push me around
Keep me from finding
What life's all about"

[Jazz]

Thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

"But I will keep fighting
Keep pushing through
Until I win this war"
The above lines are words to live by. We can't give in or give up. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jazz]

Your review is much appreciated.

[BlueDreams]

Nice message your poem gives to reader :) Yep! Never back down :) A nice read :)

[Jazz]

Thank you! :)

[BlueDreams]

My pleasure dear anytime :)