Day by day

I felt like posting something here so here goes whatever comes out of my head.

I dread the next day

I have come to dread everyday 

for each one I live

the life of another not mine

I can never live

the life that first meant for me

this life I now live

is a prison unfamiliar 

my soul is now trapped 

in bones it never knew and foreign flesh 

the torture never dies

and my hopeless cries cover my smile

now and forever

Author's Note

sorry

Reviews

[GreenSkeleton16]

i like this one the best. im really into poetry that rhymes as u can tell when u read mine but this one i rather like.

[Britt Foster]

Aw.
Very meaningful, love.
I liked it lot, and I know what you're talking about so I could connect well with the poem.

My only suggestions for future pieces is to try not to use the same words twice in a poem, if you can avoid it. Try finding syllables for some of the repeated words and it'll add a lot of variety.

Very nice poem though, I love it ^^