Determined

Craving, searching adoration

Coursing through my veins

Partly cloudy determination

Swallowing up my brains

Relentless searching through my eyes

For love and approval

Wit & humor, my disguise

Easy pain removal

Determined fervor, gracious smile

Naively believing every line

A heart thats been stitched too many times

Remains ever hopeful, yet homogenized

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

The inability to proceed coupled with the determination that one can do so, sprinkled by both the very fact scars can't vanish and false hope is what makes this a lovely poem. Good job.

[Isadora Cupcake]

Thank you for your review, Tai. Ever heard that saying, 'Laughing on the outside & crying on the inside'? That was my inspiration.