I really don't know

Falling in love is never easy, but it has a beauty of its own.

Was it the day we met? Or was it the day we spoke? Was it meant to happen? Or was it the trap I fell for? Was it the charm of your eyes? Or was it your breathtaking smile? I really don't know....

There is poison in my bloody veins, With my blood flows your memories. The brain repulses everything except you, Shows flashes of nothing but you. The heart is puzzled when it sees you, Should it halt or beat fast? It doesn't know...

Is it dream or is it real? Is it the smile or the fierce eyes? Is it you or is it just me? Is it love or is it not? I really don't know.....

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Since I do not like seeing many poems on this website describing “love” in the same old boring ways – always perfection -- it’s refreshing to see your description of total uncertainty! YES! That’s the way things REALLY happen. It’s never a straight smooth path to bliss. I love your uninhibited way of expressing yourself (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Ishwar Grewal]

wow.....thank you for such amazing words.... :)
Glad that you liked it...
and yeah it's never straight smooth path to bliss.....thats the beauty of it..isnt it? :)
it really motivates me and make me happy when someone likes my writing....thanks again....:)
with love
-ishwar

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thanks for this great poem and entry into my competition

[Coyote Poetry]

The question of love. Always a mystery.
"Is it you or is it just me?
Is it love or is it not?
I really don't know."
The above lines. We shall ask often in a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ishwar Grewal]

Rightly said that its a mystery..:)
Thank you for liking it coyote.... :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Your description sums it all up beautifully, but your poem unpacks it and puts it in all the right places, memorably.

“Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.” - Rumi.

This is how I felt reading your poem. Keep up the great work!

[Ishwar Grewal]

O my God.... Thank you so so much.... That is the most beautiful thing anyone has said for this piece of poetry..... It motivates me to write more....thank u

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Of course, you're most welcome! Glad to hear it motivates you to write more :)