When every....

open to different interpretations :)

When every sin equals morality,

Coz every wrong seems right...

When every being seems shadowy,

Coz only one glance seems bright... 

When every beat looses its strength,

Coz every nerve to heart is shivering...

When every voice seems choking,

Coz every breath is fluttering....

When you try but you can't run,

Coz every part has seized to function...

And you stand there totally numb...

Reviews

[Crowley]

There are days like this for sure. When every move I make seems to end in the worst possible scenario. I always think to myself, regardless of what's going on, the sun will set and rise again and things will be different in the morning...lol. Great piece!!!

[Ishwar Grewal]

Well said!!
thankss....... :D

[Iam-me]

I think we all get days like the one you describe to passionately above. When you feel stuck and numb. And for the life of you just can break free or get motivated in a good way.

[Ishwar Grewal]

Right DEE.... Thanks for liking my piece of writing... :)

[Iam-me]

I hope you move forward real soon. hugs.