Love and Snow

The first poem I had gotten published through my Creative writing class, also my inspiration for my first contest c:

A little white flake

falls at her feet

she hopes for no more

she has someone to meet

A little red  ribbon

is tied to her finger

she follows its trail

as snow starts to linger

a little brown path

she jumps over a  log

and it’s just her luck

that there’s so much fog

a little blue scarf

catches her sight

and his grin towards her

is almost lost in the night

a little step closer

and the ribbon that lead them there

became practically invisible

in the frigid winter air

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

Hey!! THis is really good, wonderful rhyme scheme and flow. I love poems that rhyme..