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I can't explain the pain I feel everytime I think of you. I can't put all my thoughts on paper and make it into a pretty song. I still love you with all my heart. I want to be with you. But you're not here to feel my desire. You don't care. You didn't fight to keep us together. You didn't even try. When I look back I only wonder why. Why you left me without saying goodbye. Why you hurt me, why you made me cry. I still want you to come back to me. I never wanted you to leave. I wanted you to love me for being me. But, when I see you... you don't see me.

Reviews

[deeps]

This is so sad
Like the expression you gave though

Saddening, and thought-provoking. I did notice you had a few spelling errors that were probably just typos like you mispelled one "didn't" in the end of the third line and you forgot an "l" in "still" in the middle of the fifth line. Aside from that, good poem and good luck with all of your writing.

[Mandi]

that's sad and wow you're a good writer!