Emotion

Cuts and scars heal but the tears I lose will never comeback I show emotion to feel not to hurt. I try and try to hold it in, but it all falls out forgive me for whom I am and then you will understand.

Reviews

[Mélania Woolf]

Everyone can relate to this ... Simple but deep !

[Hana Linzi]

This is something I feel that many people can relate to. I like that you were able to say that you are that way in a simple short way that anyone can understand.

[I Am Svetlana]

Stunning how a few words can be so powerful, huh? I've been through this and it's nothing easy or anything to joke about. People do certain things because they want to "feel", so then they don't have to open up to those around them. It's important to be honest with ourselves and our feelings because if we hold it all in, we will self-destruct. Many people nowadays are a ticking time bomb and I believe that everyone has their own breaking point. Wonderful write!

[Andrew]

Thank you so much I have also been through this I know it's difficult but writing is what gets me through a lot.

[I Am Svetlana]

And that's probably the best thing about writing. That we are able to get so much emotion out and say so much with very few words than most would expect. I'm always here if you ever want to talk or anything.

[Andrew]

Thank you and as to you so am I. If you ever need someone I am here.

[I Am Svetlana]

Awe, how sweet! Thank you so much :) are you free to message for a bit now? I really haven't been able to sleep all night...only if you want to though, I won't mind if you want to save it for another time in case you're tired or something.

[Alyson Nicholee]

I like this a lot, its short and straight to the point. yet still emotional! :)

[Andrew]

Awh thank you. This would have to be one of my most difficult writings just because I didn't know how to word it on paper, but it means a lot you guys like it. :)

[Katelyn]

I like it. You tell the story that emotion brings in a brief setting, but one that can be easily understood.

[Andrew]

Thank you for understanding what I was doing with this piece. A lot of people that I have read it to don't. I would really enjoy if you look at my other pieces sometimes I love the advice and criticism.

[Katelyn]

Sure :) I'll do that.

[Andrew]

Thank you :)