Burning flame

About the fire that incinerated when you first met.

When we first touched
When our eyes met
When the warmth was felt
And when the ice melt.

The sensation started
The living grew
Felt more alive
And was born anew.

The way parted
The gasoline spread
To make way
For the burning flame.

Swallowing it inside
Caging it in the heart
The intense power
Of love at start.

Igniting my bones
Amd going deeper
Chilling the marrow
And killing the sleeper.

I felt awakened
Awakened with lust
As the burning fire
Unrolled in the scorching
Sun.

Author's Note

Do ignore repeatation.
I don't know what I was writing. I just felt like it.

Reviews

[Autumn Lyric]

Very intense reading and the emotion is there...Thanks for sharing your work

[B. Boileau]

Wonderfully written, a delight to read, you captured exactly the feeling of a love born anew;
The warmth felt, the intense power, the awakening...
Well done !

[Calfuray]

You do know your pretty good for a new person here

[PeaceOfMind]

Oh my God. Thank you so much. That means so much to me. Thank you. Thank you.

[Calfuray]

sure.. i just had to say it :)