Work of magnificent art

About that girl who did so much for everyone.

She was a work of magnificent art

Fearless mind

Brave soul

A whole body while falling apart

Her heart was pure and gold

Skin shone like white ambers

Dark lips voicing melody

 Emerald eyes were fierce and bold

Her hair fell in place effortlessly

Curves that lined her perfect remains

She was one left on display

While she wanted desperately to run away

A smile never left her face

But she did cry and did break

Cause while seeing everyone laughing

She still wanted to feel that way

 

Author's Note

This poetry is something that I wrote for someone. She cant see it. But its for her. Do tell me how it is. Thank you.

Reviews

[Calfuray]

woah.. this hit me hard!!!

[B. Boileau]

Someone living a life within a life. Screams as if to say, she needs to break away, and start living
Yet another well penned verse ! Thank you for sharing