Pieces

April 14th 2010

Pieces break onto the ground, 

they shatter as they fall.

Losing pieces of myself,

he no longer picks up them all.

Trying to hold onto everything,

but i keep getting pushed away.

Losing pieces of myself, 

and hoping for a better day.

Then you come along,

now you know whats true.

Im finding pieces of myself,

and starting to think of you.

He has left me for now,

and your moving your way in.

Now im finding more pieces of myself,

and finally not thinking about him.

Trying to move on, 

thinking of someone else at last.

Now ive found all the pieces of myself,

and forgotten about the guy in my past.

Reviews

[deeps]

Pieces break onto the ground,
they shatter as they fall.
Losing pieces of myself,
he no longer picks up them all.

I loved this stanza here,
You know this could easily be turned into lyrics.
I like this alot it has an amazing flow and so rhymatic.
Very well written and an enjoyable read. Sorry about the past though.