There goes the Sun

April 6th 2010

When the sun sets,

and the everlasting night begins it parade,

will you stay here with me,

until all my sorrows fade.

When the thunder comes out, 

and the stars bring about my fears,

will you run to me at last,

and wash away all my tears.

When i am no longer able to see,

and my secrets fly off the shelf,

would you come and find me,

or leave me stranded by myself.

When the sun rises again,

and i being to lay down the knife,

will you be here in the morning,

and with your grace, bring me back to life.

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When i am no longer able to see,
and my secrets fly off the shelf,
would you come and find me,
or leave me stranded by myself.

I love these lines here, This is a well written write.
So very poetic.