Devour

Devour

A Poem by izzy(:
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April 10th 2010

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The cuts get deeper,

My eyes no longer dry,

The tears awake me,

Now i see the other side.

 

No one can see it,

The life you ripped apart,

My bodies here alone,

Along with my torn and broken heart.

© 2010 izzy(:


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Excellent rhyme scheme and flow going on here.
This is a wonderful write here I can really feel this one.
Hurts to have a heartbreak i know the feeling well.
Feelings very well expressed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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izzy(:
izzy(:

Plymouth, MI



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Writing is one of the few things im good at, to me its a way to get out things id never have the guts to say outloud. ive written something about everyone close to me, but none of them know... more..