Zero
A Poem by
Jrocktothebeat
Small entry about a moment in life.
Return deposit for a better man Broke her heart for a master plan Still I see through this Ignoring - Not Clueless Hope it’s worth all you got Won’t be there to help you up Always loved you, but I’m ashamed Feel the burn when I say your name
© 2015 Jrocktothebeat
Author's Note
Ignore grammar please. When I write songs or poems I just focus on finding the words. :)
Reviews
What you are saying, you lay right for all to see. You mention being ashamed that you will not be there to help.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I love the line ignoring- not clueless. This piece is very emotional and we'll laid out. Can't wait to see more from you!
Posted 10 Years Ago
I love the line ignoring- not clueless. This piece is very emotional and we'll laid out. Can't wait to see more from you!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
solid strong and to the point, said with conviction..nice....
Posted 10 Years Ago
solid strong and to the point, said with conviction..nice....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 6, 2015
Last Updated on April 6, 2015
Author
Jrocktothebeat Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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26 year old Introvert musician.
I love to express with art and words.
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