Empty

Her soul weeps Scarlet
As her spirit departed
Emptiness remains.

Reviews

[Dhaye]

I love this senryu...the concept is so concise yet perfectly beautiful.

When nothing remains on you even your soul...you are but a hollow space- meaningless...pointless... unoccupied...void.

Good job! Keep writing.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love this! I'm a big fan of "brevity", and this is such a welcomed sight! Nice to meet you, Rose!

[Everett DeValle]

Hmm I've always known you to be high energy. :)

But I understand the sentiments...how have you been Rose! I've missed you...how is the Virgo Lady doing? I always thought Virgos were neurotic lol jk.

[Rose]

Lol. I'm ok. How're you? I've missed you,too. How have things been?

[Everett DeValle]

I'm good, Thank you for asking...just chilling...how are your kids? It's been a while. :)

[Rose]

The kids are great. My youngest just started Kindergarten. And yes it's been quite a while. Just trying to squeeze some time for my writing. Lol

[Everett DeValle]

And write you must...you've always had a beautiful voice...I'm glad to hear that everything is good, Rose. :)

[Distantview123]

Succinctly expressive. Nicely penned. ~ Robert.

[zainul]

Very meaningful short piece.