So cold

A world so cold it sends chills down my spine
Screaming for the few seconds of everything being fine.

A body so cold, a shattered soul
Counting the days of again being whole.

I'm afraid for tomorrows emptiness
Everything is gone; no truth or righteousness.

The pieces of me dance in silhouettes
Teasing, yet pleading; nothing makes sense.

Ages and stages, trials and tribulations
My ragged being set for eternal damnation.

A sickened mentality overflowing levy's of sanity
Reoccurring memories thrashing at my lingering humanity.

Time ticks, I wonder alone, a heart beats against a hollow shell
Losing myself and my final remnants, drowning in a self- induced hell.

Author's Note

Comments. Please. :}

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, so deep, Rose...I love the emotions...your rhyming couplets is superb...it's something I feel too...wonderfully scribed.

[Rose]

Thanks, hon. :}

[Everett DeValle]

You're very welcome, Rose. :)

[Basu Gupta]

awesome write...i love the rhyme and the flow of the poem....the poem in whole is a very nice read and projects your hard-labour while writing down this....amazing...thanks for sharing..

[Antoñyo]

MMMmore like it!!! A chilling piece of confusion and deep unrest..makes the reader re-read, and think.
Loved it! Want more!!

Thanks for sharing