Opposite

My eyes close
the cold keeps me warm
succumbing is pleasant

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Well.. personally it relates to me in the sense that when I was down and at my worst the pain (or lack of feeling at all) was the only thing that KEPT me going. The fact that I felt the feeling of NOT feeling was a comfort. I think this is a beautiful thing that takes up three lines and "succumbing is pleasant" speaks to me on several levels. Overall I like it, but would like a couple more lines added to draw on a little more