Endebted

Blood, sweat, tears
I'm damned by dissipating time
Let me sign

Author's Note

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Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

A very short poem. It just feels like it is missing more detail. Did you only intend to make the poem very short? It's a good start to what could be a powerful poem. Perhaps adding just a few more lines to the poem would really help to improve it.

[Everett DeValle]

Great emotions said in very few words. Well done.