The beginning

Love at first...everything

A raw emotion
Binding, Entrancing, Chilling
Many changing hearts.

Author's Note

My very FIRST attempt at Haiku. I know, I know Haiku are suppose to be about Nature- but is love NOT a sort of nature? Anywho..

Reviews, please. Advice, welcome. Suggestions appreciated. Thoughts expressed are expected to be kind. :). Please and Thank you.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautifully done. :)

[Celeste21]

Beginnings are always raw and raw is beautiful.

[Shiningwolf]

Sooo true!

Nicely done! I've been trying out some haiku and senyru! This was really great.
It really captured love nicely, it does change so many hearts and is very raw. Really well done!

[A]

Lovely and simply true....

[Libby]

This is sweet and simple. And yes love is a sort of nature and honestly it's far more interesting ;D