Regret

A Poem by J.

Was once an Untitled poem, then I decided on this one

You pushed me away
Now it is my turn to do the same
You have no one to blame
But yourself anyway
Slowly again, walls are rising
Against the control I am despising

© 2010 J.

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Kirbetsy

Very emotional. You did a good job with the rhyme. It's not forced at all. Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gianna Perry

Very emotional. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Jones

Short but powerful. You use rhyme without compromise meaning or using a forced rhyme, which can be a hard thing to do. Nice ending. This is a strong poem, with lots of passion.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 1, 2010
Last Updated on September 1, 2010

Author

J.

Woodsfield, OH

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A woman who loves art in many forms. I prefer writing, music, drawing, painting and Photography. I have come to realize this world is a game one must master to win. And in this, life gives us tests we.. more..