Empathetic adoration

Waiting to be released from a life that is one of captivity...for the one. Yet while waiting one feels like everything around them is almost devouring them. But still, hold on to hope.

If only I could express
This pathetic excuse for a mess
Would it make a difference?
Especially in your absence
Oh God I cry out now deep within
And much to my chagrin
Should I continue to obscure?
Maybe the approach was too demure
Maybe not
Take me away before I fade
Into this imperfect shade
Allowing them to take me swift
Still a tinge of hope to lift

Maybe it doesn't matter
An unheard shatter
Fallen alone
From my rightful throne
Will he find me alive still
Before they finish the kill?

I believe, honestly I do
Only all that is missing is me with you
But I lay here
Finally with no fear
No care in this god forsaken world
holding myself furled

Reviews

[Chilson, Joshua]

Well, the true meaning behind your words eludes me right now. Told you lol science is not my basis of thought which makes it harder to understand everything though some I do. Still, this is a good write. Ah, must add, last stanza could this have to do with what is inside that your FINALLY accepting?

[Dream Weaver]

Such is lifes frosty bite, We all fear something.
But most of all we fear ourselves opening up
for all the world to see.

[Charles]

Rhyming is a difficult skill. I think you were able to pull it off here. Sometimes people force the schemes and skew the message but you engendered sympathy from me with this piece.