Rest

Slightly shaken
Fast in slumbers kiss
Taken by your ethereal touch
Moves me to awaken

Remnants still linger
Questioned, yet want more
To never leave this dream
To feel what I felt before

Ever brightly, his star shines
Seeping softly through
Our crest combines
Equisite, colorful hues

Mutually, filling the void
That drowns away emptiness
Prying eyes of envy
Gladly to avoid

No mystery or lies
Do we dare to utter
For there is no reason
Within one another's eyes

Reviews

[Michael X]

i love poetry and reading poems like this are the reason, a passionate
emphasis on wordplay, this feeling is romantic, a dreamscape and interlude
to visions that sparkle of affectionate desire., the rhyme scheme is so subtle
and smooth, it's a brilliant poem, artistically brushed across the readers heart

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I like the last stanza a lot..some moments are so delicately woven that uttering a word can spoil the fragile moment..as another of the reviews say delicate and eloquent.

[Holly]

Once again Jee ye write with such beauty :) Very beautifully written, I love the simplicity with the cryptic touch as well :) I must concur with Silent Scream as well about the flow ;)

[Dream Weaver]

Beautifully penned with a fantastic flow...

[Crow]

I love the simplicity, and the eloquence.