Light-ly Seasoned Limericks

Four Limericks; not funny but written on the lighter side. :)

Wispy is the light under trees

but seldom noticed by the birds and the Bees.

But I see them all, 

as they hear shadows call

then are altered by the slightest breeze.

(JE Falcon --- 12-10-2021)

As the sun sets into the sea

We find a place lighter than we.

Then we talk for a while, 

and you give me a smile

As we watch the sunset into the sea.

(JE Falcon --- 12-10-2021)

Warm on my face in the morning

But noon it comes without warning

Baked like meat 

in the summer's heat

But so warm on my face on a frigid morning.

(JE Falcon --- 12-10-2021)

Rainbow are a bit of a sticky wicket

and Sunbeams often get lost in a thicket.

But shadows, my friend, 

are those that trend

and are right at home in that thicket.

(JE Falcon --- 12-10-2021)

Reviews

[Gee]

I think limericks have 5 lines with a AABBA rhyme scheme, the A's having 7-9 syllables the B's 5-7, but I could be wrong :)
There once was a fella from Leeds
who swallowed a packet of seeds
in less than an hour
his arse was a flower
and his balls were covered in weeds

[JE Falcon]

Hmm, you are right about the 5 lines, but I have seen them written with the 3rd line rhyming at the center and end, but none the less, I separated line #3 into two lines. :) --- As far as the rest of what you said, this is what I've found: The rules for a limerick are fairly simple, (I like simple): They are five lines long. Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme with one another.
Lines 3 and 4 rhyme with each other. They have a distinctive rhythm, and they are usually funny, but not always. --- Yep, that does it. --- Thanks for the heads up and for feedback. It's always appreciated.

[Gee]

Good morning, I Enjoyed reading them nonetheless

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

These were wonderful limericks JE. I especially enjoyed the first two. I don't think I have ever written a limerick myself as of yet. I'm definitely going to have to try my hand at one sometime in the future.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks Carlos, it's not easy making them all funny.