Hauki, Senryu, and Me

A mix of something for fun.

Bubbles are life's dreams

Some move in the slightest breeze

Then --- (POP!) --- they are gone *** JE Falcon

In wonder he looks

His image is in the glass

Ape touches mirror *** JE Falcon

Bee is waterlogged

Near drowning in the birdbath

I play God today. *** JE Falcon

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Perfect imagery in all three, but the first one is my favorite! Well penned!

[JE Falcon]

Mine Too, thanks for the reply.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wow I loved all of these especially the last two

[JE Falcon]

Gee, thanks, Julie, happy you enjoyed my thoughts.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

I did especially the last two
Very good

[cheyenne s garcia]

well done. i enjoyed reading! hope to see more from you.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, and there will be more if I don't Croke first, LOL.

[cheyenne s garcia]

alright. sounds good!

[Soren]

Wonderful images, great writing

[JE Falcon]

Thank you, Soren, trying to stay on the lighter side.

[William Michael Reeves]

Playing God now! Man!! Bee's, bubbles and apes. It's fun to be surprised in poetry just like music.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, Bill, we try. :)

[Cherrie]

Haiku's are like digital billboards of the mind.
So effective 👌

[JE Falcon]

Thanks Cherrie. I hope that you have a great day.

[Unspoken poet]

I loved these, love that first one a lot, so nicely written

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, much, and thanks for the reply.

[M. J. Smith]

I wonder what she told her hivemates...
Nicely done.

[JE Falcon]

LOL, I wondered if the Bee even knew.