Budding --- Nicely

poem

I saw a bird landing there,

A whimsical thrush without a care,

Upon that branch, that bobs in the air,

With new buds sprouting, oh so nicely.

A whimsical Thrush without a care,

Landing on that branch that bobs in the air

With new buds sprouting, oh so nicely,

And soon, so soon, shade will appear.

Landing on that branch that bobs in the air

Was my friend, the Thrush, without a care.

And soon, so soon, shade will appear

Under the Birch Tree, Budding, --- nicely.

JE Falcon

06-10-2022

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I added a bird feeder and the birds are everywhere in my yard. I enjoyed the poetry my friend. I love the days of Spring and the Summer. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, CP, and birds are fun. Word to the wise, they make a treated bird seed that is healthy for the birds, but the seeds won't grow a plant, weed, or flower. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

You know I am a huge fan of birch trees, the silver birch in particular and even more a fan of our avian friends. Lovely poem Falcon. Flows beautifully.

Chris

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, Chris.

[Lisasview]

What a delightful and rather funny poem dear JE
I really enjoyed it… loved the flow of your rhyme
Lisa, gettin late in Spain

[JE Falcon]

Thank you so much.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome

[William Michael Reeves]

Would you call this a Falcoum? I like those advancing lines. Took a sec to realize my brain was wrapping back around it. Really cool!! And the font feels right with the poem. Nice!!!

[JE Falcon]

I'd call it, "Having some fun. And maybe dancing the dance of wordplay. The font has a comic thing going. --- Thanks.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thrushes do seem to have this kind of attitude and personality....
not a care...they just "be" like maybe we should too.
j.

[JE Falcon]

What a good idea! I'm sure my friend will agree.