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£ost in my £ife :

Nails cutting my wrist like a razor blade,
Destroying every dream that I’ve ever had,
Storms hurting my body, worms eating my brain.
Sadness and agony, loneliness feeding my pain.
My beliefs are killing me, my mind is burning.
My thoughts disappeared, to a crazy I’m turning
Running out of breath, smoke and dust,
I’m faithless, and I can’t control my lust
I’m a stone, I’m sinking, in a lake of tears
I’m alone, I’m drowning in my own fears
Every second I’m suffering, I’m in my own hell
I’ve been through everything, believe what I tell
Friendless, unwanted, thrown away
My fate hates me, and I can’t deny
This is my truth, this is not a lie
F**k my life, I really need to die
Death is the solution, my only escape
my opportunity, my life is a mistake
Angels laugh at me, Demons are crying
No friends or family, and the Devil’s smiling
God please help me, and set me free
Take me, Bury me, I need to be free.

~J'Eliot

Reviews

[Leigh]

Letting your feelings out like this is a great release, download, rant. There is a lot in this and a mixture of strong and sad feelings, this wrings of the angst of life.

[mark]

this is full of emotion very sad poem. very well written though i like the 4 lines u wrote its very true when you feel like that. great write :)

[J'Eliot]

Thank you! :)

[mark]

no worries

[annabellee]

Aw that is a poem so full of sadness...
I could totally feel your pain here.
I hope it will get or has gotten better :)
Well penned :)

[J'Eliot]

Thank you so much :D

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Cool Handless Luke]

Reminds me of a set of 10 poems I wrote that when read in order tell a story. Its called Burdalane.you write with a vibid sense of imagery. Dark and haunting. An overwhelming sadness to this.

[J'Eliot]

:)

[ron]

Wow...I want to run and help the one in your poem. To hold them and let them know every thing will be all right. You are a gifted writer.

[J'Eliot]

Aww, thanks! :)