Gracious gift

A poem about how life is an amazing gift

Nothing but a blessing

Nothing but a star

Clear as the sun in the sky

Hidden like every breath we take

A gift to us has been given

But it's up to you to see

The life you've been given, the life you can live,

is a gracious gift indeed

Reviews

[Destined for Boring]

I love the simple elegance of this poem.

[Kim]

Thank you ^^

[StrixNebulosa]

I wish more could take this view of life... I am guilty of denying it myself at times. this write has a nice simple elegance to it for what is such a complex subject... Thank you for sharing.

[Kim]

I think its easy to just... forget it sometimes. Glad you liked it :)

[SonOfPlunder]

Runs wonderfully, nice imagery. My only criticism is the odd grammatical error, but that means nothing. Nice work :)

[Kim]

Thank you :)

[Chloe_Spence]

This is beautiful- life certainly is a gift :)
I love the metaphors to do with the sky/stars
My favourite line would have to be "Hidden like every breath that we take"
Well done :)

[Kim]

Thank you :)

[Chloe_Spence]

You are welcome :)