Dear Emma

For a contest

 

Wednesday May 13^th

45 Freebird Avenue

Essex

Uk

Dear Emma,

 

So little burns more than I love I feel for you. Wrap me up, hold me tight all I need is you tonight. Touch me gently, touch me fast, I need to be enticed. You smile drives me crazy. It freezes time and sucks me in. Dear Emma, I love you. Tell me you love me.

 

I sleep each night tossing and turning trying to think of how to get you. My mind becomes consumed by images of you, every perfect curve and seductive nature. I long for you to be my girl. I will care for you and love you longer than other man will. I will buy you what you desire. Please your every need. Tell me, do you think for me?

 

You are the only one that I want. So tell me why your just a whisper in the wind?

 

Yours Forever

John Morris.

 

Deeply in love with you.

Reviews

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

This was really... sweet & sincere. It was the letter that every girl dreams of, full of love proclamations and promises and abound with hope and opportunity. Excellent write..

[Faith]

this was a very emotional poem, i feel what you are feeling, you did a great job in expressing your love for emma. :)
p.s. i loved the style, it was unique the poem in a form of a letter was an amazing choice.
beautiful work♥

-Faith

[deeps]

Sincere and touching write
I love the lines you are just a whiser in the wind.
Well said feelings here.