Complicated soul's touching

Written with a beautiful young woman that wrote the most romantic words

Complicated soul's touching 

 

Your face shines like a white full moon 

Your hair frame it like a golden ring 

I can easily feel the good vibration of your smile 

Covering my screen like a powder of happiness

 

Words that do not falter

Causing my face to lift

i enjoyed this moment

As time began to shift

 

Beginning with hello

and exchanging hearts

Beauty is in the bearer

A new friendship starts

 

Your complicated soul

With your big shining grin

Touched me deeply tonight

Started like a soft flick of your fingers

Over my lips

Painting a first smile

But later, your romantic soul was so soft

As I had to reach and touched

You let me in, like you were waiting

For our soul dance tonight  

 

Serenity Faith that's our spirits,

Seeing one another, touch is extreme

 

Reviews

[hcarson]

very nice, flows nice and no complication, it is what it is, lovely . very well written :)

[Caycie carson]

Amazing poem , good use of words

[Ellen Kolman]

beautiful poetry...beautifully written...BRAVO

[Neytri]

Great work dear poet. Was a pleasure reading it.

[Monica Garcia]

"You let me in, like you were waiting

For our soul dance tonight"

Very beautiful :) A moment so very relatable. Thank you for sharing.

[JMaster1]

Thank you Monica

[Alice14]

beautiful!!! Very romantic piece of poetry.

[groupof5]

tht is beautiful! u are very talented

[Michelle Gent]

So beautiful. I can sense the love, in your writing.