Complicated soul's touching

Written with a beautiful young woman that wrote the most romantic words

Complicated soul's touching 

 

Your face shines like a white full moon 

Your hair frame it like a golden ring 

I can easily feel the good vibration of your smile 

Covering my screen like a powder of happiness

 

Words that do not falter

Causing my face to lift

i enjoyed this moment

As time began to shift

 

Beginning with hello

and exchanging hearts

Beauty is in the bearer

A new friendship starts

 

Your complicated soul

With your big shining grin

Touched me deeply tonight

Started like a soft flick of your fingers

Over my lips

Painting a first smile

But later, your romantic soul was so soft

As I had to reach and touched

You let me in, like you were waiting

For our soul dance tonight  

 

Serenity Faith that's our spirits,

Seeing one another, touch is extreme

 

Reviews

[Swati]

Loved it! Beautifully written!

[Susanna]

I don't know that much about poems, I can only say what I like and don't like. I think this is a beautiful one..

[Breanna Riddle]

Love it. This is so beautiful. It shows true love that started with an instant spark. Really pretty.

[BlaqkShadow]

Stunning work, beautifully chosen words conjure up vivid images in the mind, love it, keep it up :D X

[ExquisiteEyes]

I was able to relate to it so much. Wonderful imagery. Well done..

[annalysiar]

Exquisite. Lovely use of words...great visual. Excellent write

[Tess Melendez]

Amazing. Totally relatable for those who've been in love.

[ScholarlyHughes]

Man, my heart. Not sure what it was about this that made me melt but wow. Wonderful.

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much :) wrote this together with a wonderful woman which I met the same night

[Tiana]

Beautifully written ... soft and sensuous ...

[silverwritinggoddess]

Beautiful! Just beautiful! So touching and so sweet that it touches the soul. Well done!

[JMaster1]

Thank you Jennifer