No More

Are you lost

beneath your false promises and lies

Cant you you see, that i have already realized

Your love and affliction's a disguise

making me filled with anxiety and despise

Why did you make me trade my happiness for your lies 

I've always been aware of what you've done

Only been abusing for the sake of your fun

You know

You were flying too close to the sun

But every time i want you near me

You make a quick run

So now

I only knew pain

from what you call it need

Do you think i'm insane

Through you i only saw a liar and a thief

Who abuses the love that i gave for her greed

I had hoped

I believed

But I'm beginning to think that I've been deceived

So NO

I don't need you so i can feel the sorrow anymore

I've paid for my mistakes

and you will pay for what you've done

Your time has come to be replaced

Your time has come to be erased

Author's Note

My own words with the lyrics of the song "No More Sorrow"

Reviews

[A.L.]

Phew, whoever wronged you better watch out. This poem is written with warnings all over!

Excellent write Joey. You are able to see through the emotions to see the truth and accept it, that's the hard part.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Duffy, just pouring whats need to be said.

[A.L.]

That's what this site is for. Keep on keeping on. :)

[Joey Nizz]

exactly! its great to find a place where to meet minds that are inspirational and unique who share their talents.

[A.L.]

Well I'm glad you found this site then!

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks again :)

[emmajoy]

And, that's that, says it all - had enough.. and all in great meter and phrasing. No nonsense rhyme, truth be told, smouldering rawness. Hope is more than a full cup of expectation, tis also a half cup of possibility.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks, i just took what was on my mind into this page.

[Jes' Pi]

I love this..Amazing words..

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Atashusi I appreciate it :)