Sad Little boy

Once i knew a boy who loved to draw

He drew pictures that no one ever saw

He was very artistic late in the night

In his bathroom out of anyone's sight

He kept a secret no one knew

He didn't tell a single soul and his gallery grew

His drawings were different, no paper nor pen

But needed a bandage every now and then

We stood by the river under the stars

He rolled up his sleeves to show me his scars

Felt really embarrassed and looked down at his shoe

Than I rolled up my sleeves and whispered "I draw too"

Reviews

[SamSim27]

I've used the word 'powerful' in a few reviews already, but I'm tempted to use it again. Once again you have produced a powerful and thought provoking piece. Good job Joey :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much! i really appreciate it :)

[Casey Lou]

This is lovely, and quite emotional.
If it's alright I might correct a few grammar mistakes?

"I" should have a capital letter, "In his bathroom", "his gallery grew", "His drawings were different", "to show me his scars", "looked down at his shoe".

Again, I really enjoyed this poem. There's true sensitivity behind these words. I loved, loved the last two lines. Well done. :)

[Casey Lou]

Also, "than" should be "then". :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much, and thank you for correcting me and its ok always feel free if you noticed anything wrong in any of my writings. Thanks again.

[Abraham George]

Hes also work there that's why i changed my comment. i was suppose to say the same, but hes is ok there

[Joey Nizz]

Its ok, and thank you both! :)

[Abraham George]

its good but can i suggest any corrections?

[Joey Nizz]

sure go for it

[Abraham George]

i am wrong. its good nothing to change

[Joey Nizz]

Alright no problem, but if you ever see any mistakes in any of my writings please make sure to let me know ill be more than happy to be corrected.
But thanks anyways for reviewing this.

[APOORVA]

i can relate to this boy.
i can totally connect to what have you expressed.
great one
huge respect

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, it is something i also can relate too plus a little bit of outside of the box thinking.read moreThank you, it is something i also can relate too plus a little bit of outside of the box thinking.
Thanks for the review singh