The Tear

She always used to wear a tear under her eye

To let the ones around her see the sadness

But she always used to hide it with a smile

To mask the pain from everyone else

She always used to wear a tear under her eye

Because of her confused yet troubled mind

Love or to be loved she always questioned

The one she wanted, who and why

She always used to wear a tear under her eye

Because of the feeling of being trapped deep inside

All alone

Lost and scared

She always used to wear a tear under her eye

Wondering if she was someone else other than her, someone whos not her

Someone different

someone new

Someone SHE never knew

Reviews

[Warrior]

That was awesome but are you trying to say tapped or trapped in one of your sentences?

[Joey Nizz]

Its trapped, and just fixed it and noticed an other mistake also that i fixed something else.

Thanks for pointing out the mistake.

[Warrior]

no problem:)

[APOORVA]

and i just have fallen for this writing by heart.
damn! you made me love every line of this.
what a creative, captivating and enormously heartfelt poem...
LOVED IT

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you! i appreciate your thoughts, but can you re read it because i just fixed a couple of mistakes that o have just noticed.

Thanks again for your comment!