A Journey

You've embarked on a new journey

To find out what sort of new journeys your life will offer

A journey of finding yourself

A journey of love

A journey of lust

A journey so pure

A journey you'll never regret..

A journey of freedom

A journey of happiness

A journey of sadness

A journey you'll never forget

The extraordinary and memorable times we spent with one another

Times of dispute and fights

Times of pleasure mixed with pain

Times which can never vanish

Times that sometimes can never be the same

It is time for you

to bid farewell

Time to lament and cry

and to gaze with a smile

Time to be apart

Time to carry the pain

Time to promise to stay

Time to love always

but for now

Its time for you to go beyond and sail..

Reviews

[Rusteangi Ruba]

I loved your poem 'journey' it's although the journey of our life.
It's inspiring to everyone.
Nice and awefull work

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it ^^

[Rusteangi Ruba]

Lovely to express thought
U r welcome

[Stacy Purvis]

This is so lovely in a semi-heartbreaking way.
You took your time with it, too...thoughtful.
It's a lovely read.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, its just how i felt before writing it.
Thanks again for your review :).

[Enchanted-Raven]

Nicely done, enjoyed :) x

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much and Im glad you did ^^

[Hope]

Great work, Joey...
An encouraging work. Loved the repetition......
Keep writing..:)

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Naat!
Im glad you did! ^^

[Hope]

You are welcome......

[apennylate]

Repeated lines, and happiness drive... This inspiring little piece of work... No time to lament or cry... Well penned...

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Silente, Im glad you think so :)

[apennylate]

Absolutely, you are welcome...

[Casey Lou]

*One and other should be "one another".
This is nice. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for pointing it out, I fixed it! :p
Thanks for reviewing also! ^^

[CAPOLAVORO]

The journey of time. Nice chosen topic and well written. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you I'm glad you think so! ^^

[Mel Jayne]

I really liked this piece and I think that it has a lot of big strengths, with a few changes I think that this could be made perfect. One of these changes would be to change journey's to journeys, also 'extraordinary yet and memorable' to either 'and' or 'yet' but not both. These are just some things that you can use to improve this but it's still really like.

[Joey Nizz]

Done!
Thank you for your review and help, we can always get better as long as we have friends around us to help us.

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You have captured life's beginning and end in few words. Beautifully written as always. Your poems are always thoughtful and inspiring. I truly like them.

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Najam!
Im really glad that you like this and all of my writings, you have been a great support and I truly thank you!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome ☺

[Jes' Pi]

Sweet poem...............

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Jes'Pi :p
Im glad you think so! ^^