Pull The Trigger

You can hear my heart beating

You say you see it dripping down my chin

But you can only see the crater through my chest that you ripped open

You filled it and seeded it with terror, deep inside of me but I'm not leaving

And I know that I must excel this trial or test

So what're you waiting for?

Pull it!

Ain't nobody gonna do it for you because you know you want to

PULL IT!

Don't hesitate, just do it just shoot!

When I said

I'd die for you and take a bullet for you

I.. I didn't intend

For you to be the one

Pulling the trigger

You stabbed me a hundred times

you acted like you were the one who was bleeding

And the worst part was

Everyone was tending to you

While I was the one bleeding to death

So yeah, maybe you should pull the f*****g trigger.

Author's Note

To me, the thing that is worse than death is betrayal.
You see
I could conceive death
But I could not conceive betrayal.

Malcolm x

Reviews

[Sinbulvinter]

"You stabbed me a hundred times
You acted like you were the one who was bleeding"

- This line right here, is extremely relatable to me.

Very expressive and raw here with emotions. I can feel so many feelings in these words; anger, pain, betrayal, longing, hate and love.
Great job

[Joey Nizz]

Its funny isn't it? the way people are to you and you to them? You give them your all but in the end it wont matter, they'll just ignore you after all that you have done for them, they'll hurt you but accuse you of whatever is hurting them.

Thank you for your review, and I hope that you wont face any betrayals.

[Sinbulvinter]

It is sad the uncaring and selfish way of some people, to hurt others yet never see the pain they cause. =(

[Joey Nizz]

They only see them selves and only wanna do what benefits them, not caring what happens to anybody else who's affected, it is truly sad to see what their doing to us and it is sad to see them like this also.

[Giulia King]

Amazing, Joey! So much emotions and depth in this one

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for your review Gullia, i'm glad that you think so! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's damn awesome my friend, and i agree with you betrayal is worse than death..
Really good work

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks man i'm glad that you think so and glad that you liked it! :)

[pia]

Wonderfully written.
You did a good job here
Every word here brings out the feeling one has when betrayed
Loved it

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for your review
Im glad you you liked it :)