Fisherman

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Fisherman works hard,

Drinks much then lies on hard floor;

sleep comes easily.

Author's Note

all yours Leah if you want it

Reviews

[Lily1111]

Simplistic and entertaining.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What an interesting Senyru. Warm wine and bread its said can raise the dead, I think enough wine was applied in this case. lol

[Emily Rose]

Ooh, a great haiku! Or... senryu. It's hard for me to tell the difference. The image you paint is great though, and the simple, sparse language makes it feel more real. Good job :-)

[Leah Simone]

Ha, I found it - thank you :-)

[Thomas James Martin]

I like it too for its simplicity, John.

Tom

[Dan Bullock]

heh!! I like it's simplistic heart! This amuses me for all the right reasons..and I'm VERY fussy :-p