Gravity

A Poem by JohnL

A Matter of Balance.

Shaded beneath stone;

It falls over onto me;

Ouch! The hurt, I groan.

© 2008 JohnL

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Gary H

Haven't read one of these for ages. Very good. I've just been watching Apocalypse Now and have thought of a better end 'Ouch, the hurt, I groan' as in Marlon Brando's 'the horror, the horror' at the films end.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

I love it! What a great performance for a tiny chap of a poem! Thanks for sharing this, it's a great finish to my day. Take care. :-)

Posted 17 Years Ago

Craig Bates

Hahah
short, simple, sweet
made me smile to myself
could you ask for much more?
Thanks for the read

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 8, 2008
Last Updated on September 9, 2008

Author

JohnL

Wirral Peninsula, United Kingdom

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I live in England, and love the English countryside, the music of Elgar and Holst which describes it so beautifully and the poetry of John Clare, the 'peasant poet' and Gerard Manley Hopkins, which d.. more..