Your pleasure is mine

Breathe… come hither to these adoring eyes. I see you as the most exhilarating woman to have ever graced this earth. Such beauty and compassion I thought could never exist, but here you are standing before me. Like a newly blossomed passion flower your scent arouses me, filling the air with your magnificence.  

 

My bated enthusiasm now showers me with your illuminating presence I cannot turn away. Kiss me, so that I might feel what it’s like to be captivated. Hold me, so I might know exquisite dreams. Make love to me, so that all men will be envious of what they could never have. Whisper in my ear how I may satisfy you, for your pleasure is mine.

Reviews

[RainC]

You've won! Convincing me that you write with a pen of gold that produce stunning masterpieces! :) Love how you manipulate words! Just beautiful!, DWeaver! :)

[Dream Weaver]

You're much too kind Rain...But thank you I'm flattered really I am! :)

[marcia0808]

wow... a really lovely piece, I must say:-) But I'm wondering if perhaps a "roses are red" beginning wouldn't "class it up" a bit:-) ?! lol (ummm..... is humor allowed here?? Cuz if not, I gotta go!!!!) Seriously though, this is beautiful.....

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Marcia... thank you Kindly and yes humor is absolutely allowed here! ;)

[SyberRose]

Another lovely piece from you...and I liked the title too. Nicely done...SyberRose

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Rose, always appreciated.

[EileenMarie]

Ok..... back to earth....... phew!!!! great write, nice to know a man can feel this way :)

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Eileen, you're much too kind. I'm guessing their are a few who do...the trick is finding them :)

[PP]

A very expressive piece of write..

"Make love to me, so that all men will be envious of what they could never have." most beautiful lines :)

[Dream Weaver]

Thanks ever so much, I truly appreciate the review...

[PP]

You're most welcome..2 paragraphs of passion!

[Dream Weaver]

2 out of the missing 3 ain't bad no? :)

[PP]

LOL! 2 is always better than 3!

[Dream Weaver]

I agree...3's a crowd! :)~

[PP]

hahaha..most definitely !