Immortal Beloved

I see right through you there’s nothing to hide, let me show you the love kept deep down inside.

 

No need for mercy for we are a team, drawing the blood of this silent scream. I shall love you like none before, as I lead you to my bedroom door.

 

Tender secrets between we two, everlasting fusion binds us like glue. Immortal beloved I shall show you the light, when you're hungry for love, I'll supply it all night. When pain and pleasure become one in the same, erotic and sinful just keep shouting my name. I caress your urges, you provoke my soul, I sink deeper and deeper into your black hole.

 

Wondrously wicked we fit like a glove, no earth below us no skies above. Shall I kiss your fiery lips or pull you hair while I grasp your hips...Do with me what you've always dreamed of, I will return it with three times the love. There's no one else just you and me, nothing pulling us apart, not even gravity.Lets live forever lets hold on tight, we've a long way to go so lets embrace it tonight...

Reviews

[Faceless Love]

I am tired from reading all that. A good tired ;) Fantastic flow ! I love how the pics always go with the poem. You have some talent. Keep up the excellent work.

[Sara Mercury]

Good luck with that! lol

Great rhyme.

[Seashell]

Ohhh golly gosh !!! I'm exhausted ... lol

great stuff yet again...

Thanks SS
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[Ladysue]

A fantastic flow...such ease and you really had some great lines in this piece...much enjoyed...

[Amy Bumpas]

Some nice lines here: No need for mercy for we are a team, drawing the blood of this silent scream. When pain and pleasure become one in the same, erotic and sinful just keep shouting my name. I caress your urges, you provoke my soul

Wouldn't we all like to have a immortal night like that LOL!!

[Matthew Kult]

I had a family guy moment.

Great flow and awesome read. I expected something and got something different.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

immortal rendition of immortal love~ sinous dusky purr~