Humanity Unleashed

Inside information

Brittle exchanges, sentimental liberties a

fleeting desperate annihilation of cruelty.

 

Esoteric hatred, a stones throw into

a dismal sanctuary of livid dreams shattered.

 

Cruel infantile obstructions sway tormented

hanging in the balance of self promotional   

wretchedness…

 

A tempest crown bestows a tranquil wanton

bathed in a deluge of disenchantment…

 

Arrogance conceit pretentious billowing bales

of bovine excrement, unveiling the true nature

of man’s maniacal folly.  

“Humanity unleashed” 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Such powerful awareness . Your writing amazes, varies according to your day's thinking or your night's mood. There's so much reality in this, unlike the fantasy pieces; and i wonder which is you. Incredible, memorable, because of its truth and honest drama, it makes both mind and body care.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Our primitiveness and how it rears its ugly head is tremendously scary is it not? Wonderfully penned and exposed Dream Weaver!

[TJ]

This poem really exposes the deep and exposed workings of true humanity. 99 percent of people are motivated by some level of greed or reward and unfortunately those are the ones in power

[Liza]

we are so close to being animals its quite scary :)
yet mother nature doesn't condemn the kingdom (predator and prey) but we create an afterlife so all behave in this life....to keep the beast tame :)

[Loner]

Extremely intense , great depth , and thought provoking ..... an awesome poem
u have hit the bulls eye again!

[Dana Kathryn]

Haunting and very powerful indeed..I hope we learn before it is to late! :)

[Ladysue]

omg wow this was so strong and hard to actually take it in, but so well done...your point can be felt with gripping sharpness...

[Marie Harrison]

We live and die by our own sword! What a vile poem. I loved every word.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

riveting reality of the hands that string their own noose~ flawless iron hard composition~ one can almoast taste the bitter metal aftertase of what humanity has wrought~