Adieu Fair Maiden

Drunk with power the fair Maiden resists, she removed this brave Knight from her readers list!

Forlorn is she far disheveled from the light, the walking wounded hapless and contrite

 

Her life a dungeon shackled tightly and stark, relinquished her once roaring fire reduced to a spark!

The Knight dares not revel in this quest he had won the battle in this verbal jest!

Alone is she… cursed and forgotten, the blackest of souls sullied and rotten. Drunk with apathy, this fair maiden did
fall, presently a shadow on her dungeon wall.

 

Never again will she challenge the brave Sir Knight, never again to put up a fight. And so it goes the good knight prevails, he took the wind right out of her sails.

 

This angry the fair maiden with a perennial rage, is fit to be tied as she’s torn from this page. Her silver spoon fed notoriety, means absolutely s**t to you and me!

Author's Note

Based on a true story from another poetry site...About a woman poet who thought she was above all others. She was lewd and crude with her reviews so I had to take her down a notch and she called me now get this...A cement head? I'm still laughing at that years later! Hope you all enjoy.

Reviews

[Adel Eyes]

I read this a few times....each time it created a different image, so I know it will appeal to more than one mindset. Good work

[Ladysue]

ha! a bit of humor in this one..a great drama indeed...good writing...

[Lilly]

Some great writing mixed with light humour (and an interesting source of inspiration) makes this an enjoyable and engaging piece

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A complete and compelling story..sounds interesting.

[Robin]

a perfect drama / comedy

[David W Moore III]

Nicely done. For the pen is mightier than the sword (as long as your pen is 'long' enough, oh, wait, I'm mixing metaphor with double entendre.) write on fair knight.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

tee hee~ bawdy little slap~you've got me chuckling from the sharp serving of acerbic wit~ lol

[Amy Bumpas]

Love this line:Drunk with apathy, this fair maiden did
fall, presently a shadow on her dungeon
wall.

I think it's funny....you put her in her place LOL!!

[Cherrie]

I dont know which is better the flow of the words which is great or the humor of it.