Invisible people

People dressing loud trying to be seen
silent screams
broken dreams
trying to break out the scene
don't need a motive
tired of the seeds of ignorance
never fit

JSDEUEL COpyright 2008

Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

Ahhh, yes.

That is life it seems, doesn't it?

Every one is so busy but not going any where at all. Very profound and intense writing.

[Red_Queen]

Short and sweet i liked it good job. keep it up.

[KayOss]

Short, yet intense... Quick, yet powerful. This captures your poem. Great work here. I enjoyed reading it.