Mr. Kitty

A Poem by Joshua Carl Cruz

Senryu

Canned tuna in hand

jumps from lap to the ground

hungry cat meows

© 2017 Joshua Carl Cruz

Author's Note

cant tell which end goes up or down

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FaeryQueen

cool form btw. i love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

cimmy wuv xxxooo

Idk if i would call this a poem lol.
More like a sentence. If you want an honest review i love cats but i didn't like this poem much but thats just my opinion. Keep writing always :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

its a haiku. and not great I admit. a funnier and well written one is called a peeling done by cher.. read more

10 Years Ago

It is most likely good just don't think i like haikus is all lol.

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Added on August 11, 2015
Last Updated on July 26, 2017

Author

Joshua Carl Cruz

Mexico City, D.F., Mexico

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I've been working at figuring out what writing means to me. So far, it means just that, writing. A lot of it. more..