Burn

Let it all sift, watch it all drift as it burns to the ground

One more song
One more thought
One more reminder

I'm gonna light it up, watch it burn, let it all sift watch it all drift as it all burns to the ground

One more piece
One more memory
One more reason

To light it all up, watch it all burn, let it all sift, watch it all drift as It all burns to the ground

One more wave
One more crave
One more step

I'll light it all up, watch it all burn, let it all sift, watch it all drift as It all burns to the ground


Oct 28th, 2015

Reviews

[Jackie]

Thank you very much. I.sure do appreciate it!! :-)

[Alucard6336]

Hey, this is catchy. Perhaps a bit metaphorical? The flow works, and the form works well. It piques interest, and leaves things to the imagination. Would be a good chorus to a song. Good job! :)