Your Creation

A spitting image, everything within.

she is so insecure. Lost in fear
She sheds more than a single tear
It has become Crystal clear why
she wishes to disappear.

The raw emotion, the misery she holds in
a wonder why she struggles coping
when one keeps it going
open and exposed, it's showing

Your doing, your ruin. A spitting image
Like a reflection from a mirror
Everything she's buried within is o
f your creation....

Oct 31st, 2015
Cj potts

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[icelandicblue]

I like this alot. Put it into stanzas and I think your words will be more powerful.