Disgraced

The piece I've recovered from remnants, broken up bits of what I remembered yesterday. Slight difference in wordplay. Best I can do. I am in fact very proud that I could get this much down and that I

My heart, it break
s from the condition of this place.
The bitter taste
the trouble we've faced.
These acts cannot be erased
Like scars, Reminders of what and who we are
Disgraced

The fall of an entire race
Diminished, up in flames
mother earth destroyed in his name.
Nothing will ever be the same
not as long as we mourn out in the rain.
An Alien controlling your brain
making you go insane.

We are disgraced

Its what you are
we've gone to far.
We have inflicted these scars.
Stimulated, insinuated, disintegrated.
We've torn out the heart
torn this place apart.
Battle born we've worn
down from the start


This is the reality
we've faced,
the bitter taste
Tragedy embraced.
The catastrophes of today .
with such distaste
a tragic mistake.

We are disgraced....


December 27th, 2015

Author's Note

I had to completely recover this one from my own head as I had highlighted and pasted the previous one over top of this. Please be easy. It may not be exactly what it originally was but it was the best I could do from memory.

Reviews

[Jackie]

Tried to clean it upnas best I can. Hope this works for you!:)

[Jackie]

Its not working I mean..lol

[Jackie]

Just strongly ashamed of the condition of this world and the people who either know and do nothing or are brainwashed and fully believe in there so called leaders. In opinion they are the tyrants, the terrorists. Funding wars, fueling they greed and control. Just tired of the same old same old same. Its clearly working it never has, we need a new system that works for everybody. Not just the rich.

[Verdant Cynic]

What inspired this poem? Many people like to keep the origins secret and leave it up to the reader, but I'm always curious about the inspiration!

The poem is a bit hard to read with multiple sentences on a single line. Personally, I would find it easier to read if each sentence was on its own line.