Raw Emotion

Raw Emotion

A Poem by Jackie
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A face full of raw emotion. Notice with more than an notion. There is an ocean so cold, frozen

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Raw emotion

Wasteful, distasteful, disgraceful.
A face full of raw emotion. Notice
with more than just a notion
There is an ocean so cold, frozen
Aggressively Closing. Progressively growing.
Severe symptoms showing. No way of knowing
when the lighting strikes or the thunder starts rolling
When the tide rises effectively overflowing.

March 15th, 2016

© 2016 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
Started out with 3 words that rhyme. Anyway I was lookin through my file and decided to play with the words in this one you y'all like it...:)

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Nice job. Great imagery. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago
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Leo
It definitely resonated with me and hence took me seconds to read it and fathom..only because it read smoothly and beautifully with imagery and raw emotion..bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jackie

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words

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Jackie
Jackie

Eau claire, WI



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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..