Your Side

Sometimes I struggle
Stepping outside my bubble
I am befuddled
As to why I can't be subtle

Sometimes I don't know
As to why I can't let go

I won't lie
I don't know why
Sometimes
I just can't see your side

I won't hide
And I won't deny
How tough it may be
Just to see mine

Sometimes I don't know
As to why I cant let go

And I won't lie
I don't know why
Sometimes
I just can't see your side

Sometimes I don't know why
I get so caught up on the inside
Lost inside of my own mind
Can't find my way outside

I don't know, I don't know
Why I just won't let go

And I won't lie
I don't know why
Sometimes
I just can't see your side




August 2nd, 2016

Author's Note

Thinking about my current situation.

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

This is a really good write... I liked the use of these lines
"And I won't lie
I don't know why
Sometimes
I just can't see your side "

this repetition made me feel as if I were reading some lyrics

[Jackie]

Thank you shadowine.

[Lydia Shutter]

I liked the repetition in this write. It's difficult to understand why others see things the way they do. All you can do is listen and try. This sounds like lyrics for a song. Lydi**

[Jackie]

Thanks and yes I've been trying more and more to write in the form of lyrics. I even been going back on old poems and attempting to turn them to lyrics. If you have some time check out the one called "panic mode" let me know your thpught s on that as well. Thanks for the response and your time. Its really very much appreciated!:)